Wow, Layla popped out of nowhere. XD Love the last panel. *into violence XD* I like the panel layout here~ Tyson's hair's pretty in the first panel, too. XD *fluffs it*

Top right corner could use something though, since it's a fair bit of it's blank; a bit of background does the trick, usually~ (Ahh, I hope my random crits don't bother you; I tend to be a bit of a crit-monkey. 8D;;)

posted by Saiko on 17 Feb 2008 11:33 am

I actually like your crits Saiko, I find feedback very helpful!^^
I never get it on DD either, so this is nice--thanks!

posted by Skullbie on 17 Feb 2008 11:55 am

XDD HE JUST GOT WACKED OUT OF NO WHERE. THAT SUX.

posted by Kokkoii-Matoku on 17 Feb 2008 12:03 pm

Hehe, awesome; glad my feedback'll help~ And if you have anything to point out on my stuff, feel free to tell me; I'm always up for crits. :]

posted by Saiko on 17 Feb 2008 01:12 pm

Ow. D:
That looks...really painful.

posted by Azumitaiko on 17 Feb 2008 06:23 pm

*Snap Crackle pop* this is good. love Layla! she is kick a**

posted by Postergirl on 18 Feb 2008 12:03 pm

love your comic so far!! OuO
can't wait to read more! <333

+fav

posted by alexisneo on 18 Feb 2008 03:44 pm

LOL i love layla <3

posted by magik girl on 18 Feb 2008 08:54 pm

awww, she's not so bad, i like 'er! anyone got her number?!

posted by PocketHunter on 20 Feb 2008 04:06 pm